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Model: Jillian :heart:

Thank you! :bow:
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I love the way the model blends into the lower section of your shot. The lower section seems overexposed, but when you juice it up with the upper section, it all becomes obvious. Her smile supports the summer-feel of the picture, and the image relays happy seasons. The look in her eyes makes me wonder what she longs for, but her eyes tells me it's something good. I think this picture is very well composed, and gently edited. The only thing I want to point out, is that I would have loved to reduce the overexposure blend at the lower section of the pic, to make the transition from clear to white a bit less powerfull. Otherwise; Nice work!!!
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BeyondTheHorizon Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Judging from the thumb, I said; "Yes, I wanna see this one!" When seeing the shot, I got disappointed, cuz it's full of text and frames, totally ruining the picture. Sorry sweetie...
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a-place-of-hiding Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I removed the watermarks, would you mind to critique again? I do value all my DA friends' comments, thats how I learn and grow. Thank you for your time!
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BeyondTheHorizon Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Done ;-)
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Submitted on
May 16, 2010
Image Size
352 KB
Resolution
600×892
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Camera Data

Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
Shutter Speed
1/32 second
Aperture
F/11.0
Focal Length
33 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 14, 2010, 4:11:40 PM
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